tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post5310856758594385220..comments2023-07-27T19:58:32.427+05:30Comments on Nirvana 'living': Hidden in your eyes #OctPoWriMo 2013 day 2Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03296678316132669984noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-72116355916553052152013-10-03T14:08:31.338+05:302013-10-03T14:08:31.338+05:30@mentalmosaic
So finally there is a reader who has...@mentalmosaic<br />So finally there is a reader who has really got what went through my mind while writing. <br />Haha! The best is yet to be revealed. <br />Thanks for writing this! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03296678316132669984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-73014316155625173672013-10-03T14:05:40.891+05:302013-10-03T14:05:40.891+05:30@Kamal pandey
Oh my God! You awesome guy I am so p...@Kamal pandey<br />Oh my God! You awesome guy I am so proud of!<br />I think my blog and heart awaits for your comment in form of a poem. It means so much to me! I get inspired by you. <br />Thanks for taking out time and writing this! Really! <br />Hugs! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03296678316132669984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-61951918630278345732013-10-03T14:03:47.678+05:302013-10-03T14:03:47.678+05:30@snlkc
Wohhooo!! You liked! Mission successful! Yi...@snlkc<br />Wohhooo!! You liked! Mission successful! Yippeeee! <br />Oh you know I have brown eyes :O<br />Love you too di! :*Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03296678316132669984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-28784409501025602892013-10-03T14:01:49.661+05:302013-10-03T14:01:49.661+05:30@Beauty and the BEast
I guess thats what poetry is...@Beauty and the BEast<br />I guess thats what poetry is all about then- expressing. <br />Keep dropping by often please :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03296678316132669984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-19441829104019618752013-10-03T14:00:55.133+05:302013-10-03T14:00:55.133+05:30@ankitsharma88
Oh! so you too adore these two beau...@ankitsharma88<br />Oh! so you too adore these two beauties! Same pinch! <br />Am so happy you liked it, means so much to me (cos nimue di keeps talking of you).<br />Thank you soo much for making a comment! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03296678316132669984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-70713960352597480012013-10-03T13:59:12.048+05:302013-10-03T13:59:12.048+05:30@TO TOUCH THE HORIZON
Thank you! and I dont know w...@TO TOUCH THE HORIZON<br />Thank you! and I dont know why I cant make a comment on your blog?<br />Let me know if you know why. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03296678316132669984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-64583103967124801942013-10-03T13:58:29.513+05:302013-10-03T13:58:29.513+05:30@Shah Wharton
Am glad you liked it ! ^_^
Thanks f...@Shah Wharton<br />Am glad you liked it ! ^_^ <br />Thanks for making a comment :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03296678316132669984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-77020021728680769962013-10-03T06:11:52.525+05:302013-10-03T06:11:52.525+05:30Your poem reminds me of flirtatious glances... Hop...Your poem reminds me of flirtatious glances... Hoping and wondering what the other is thinking... What they choose to reveal - or not!Tui Snider @mentalmosaichttp://www.mentalmosaic.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-82040893417582095332013-10-02T23:10:58.765+05:302013-10-02T23:10:58.765+05:30I gazed into your eyes
Couldn't help but notic...I gazed into your eyes<br />Couldn't help but notice the shimmering light<br />Your eyes, mirage of my soul<br />Continuing my journey through universe the whole.<br /><br />There is an invisible force<br />Connecting my eyes to yours<br />I can see my inner self<br />Through that open door<br /><br />Stumbling n be lost<br />is my focus prime<br />I couldn't help but love you<br />till the end of time.<br /><br />Last line sab kuch keh rhi h..aage bolne ki jrurt nahi h.( oo teri..ye bhi rhym kr gai)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10003267819081890560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-8529770048232848192013-10-02T22:46:50.872+05:302013-10-02T22:46:50.872+05:30Aavi ! This was brilliant ! Very touching .. so we...Aavi ! This was brilliant ! Very touching .. so well expressed .. I'm going to try to read the brown in your eyes next time we meet :) Love you !snlkchttp://ifleetlyfleeifly.blogspot.in/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-85696081761079950252013-10-02T21:51:21.379+05:302013-10-02T21:51:21.379+05:30That's a beautiful way to portray how you feel...That's a beautiful way to portray how you feel!Beauty and the BEasthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06566815740726997780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-33571097866585940342013-10-02T21:36:58.707+05:302013-10-02T21:36:58.707+05:30If only I could have written a poem to speak of it...If only I could have written a poem to speak of its beauty. But then the two wordmistress whom I adore dearly has already said a lot. <br /><br />In short this was so amazing. So beautiful. For a simple sweet post has the power to build a broken soul too. Keep writing :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-71995823199501451742013-10-02T20:55:57.892+05:302013-10-02T20:55:57.892+05:30beautifully penned.beautifully penned.TO TOUCH THE HORIZONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11700488929956251660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-48211901315939035582013-10-02T20:00:49.749+05:302013-10-02T20:00:49.749+05:30Beautiful sentiments here. Lovely. XBeautiful sentiments here. Lovely. XShah Whartonhttp://shahscribbles.wordpress.com/2013/10/02/octpowrimo-2013-seeking-poety/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-58546147535319930222013-10-02T19:44:24.626+05:302013-10-02T19:44:24.626+05:30@Lady Whispers
Its so amazing that I get comments ...@Lady Whispers<br />Its so amazing that I get comments in form of poems. Just boosts me up so much to write even more. <br /><br />Oh so happy! I touched! :')<br />Thank you soo much diii! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03296678316132669984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-3601627700432301182013-10-02T19:42:49.640+05:302013-10-02T19:42:49.640+05:30@Nimue
Oh di! I can see how happy you are. and I a...@Nimue<br />Oh di! I can see how happy you are. and I am the reason behind your happiness means so much to me :')<br />Amazingly you have written di, filled with love. <br />Thank you for being so inspirational! :)<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03296678316132669984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-30729443591567337012013-10-02T19:32:27.985+05:302013-10-02T19:32:27.985+05:30I don't hide much
I just dream with them
Of t...I don't hide much<br />I just dream with them <br />Of the ways I could find<br />To wipe those tears<br />And to bring a smile<br />To the one who makes me live<br />With her own existence.<br /><br />Man you are such a gem to the poetry world :) What a take and what a writer I say :) Lady Whispershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15051384418188753857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-994014652129011780.post-6925807592403906012013-10-02T19:20:41.622+05:302013-10-02T19:20:41.622+05:30Its not what i hide,
But what you still read,
Its ...Its not what i hide,<br />But what you still read,<br />Its not the colors in eyes<br />But the ones my heart fills,<br />When you hold my hands ,<br />And ask me for a dream,<br />I wish someday i could say,<br />You are my dream, make it true. <br /><br /><br /><br />You can imagine how much i loved your poem that i was forced to write this. Thank you aavika .. for this gem of inspiration. Love u .. love your poem. Pratibhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060001943746107173noreply@blogger.com