Spell bounded; breathtaking
Begetting beautiful thoughts in my mind
I see paradise
A thousand times I have felt you
Indeed; you are a nature's fancy
Mystery you remain to most of us
Capture me under your tyranny
A thousand times you have held me
Your warmth is all I see
Penetrating deep down my skin
Usher me in the heavens of all kind
A thousand times you have come to me
Crossing miles and miles
I yearn for you more;
stay with me all night
A thousand times I have tried
To tell the world what you mean to me
But words fail to describe
That... "You complete me"
Brilliant. Absolutely . A typically poignant piece of poetry it is Aavika:)
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ReplyDelete@Swateye
ReplyDeleteI can see you've tried too hard and yet you were determinant to post a comment :D Thanks a lot for that! :) A huge smile crosses my face. Love you! <3
nice :-)
ReplyDelete@Jagpreet
DeleteThank you thank you thankyou! :)
It strongly reminds me of my poem 'A Thousand Times Over'. In fact, your entire blog reminds me of my blog. Happy :)
ReplyDeleteThis was a beautiful poem.
@Saumya di
DeleteI hope that is a compliment ? :S Poem is not really my forte, I know it somewhere, yet I try :P
Lovely, soulful poem!
ReplyDelete@Madhuresh
DeleteDid my blog appear in "next blog" option? Am so glad I've got an enthusiastic reader! Thanks a lot for the comment too!