Deep Thought

"A man would do nothing, if he waited until he could do it so well that no one would find fault with what he has done"
- Cardinal Newman

Thursday, October 3, 2013

That poem. This day. #OctPoWriMo 2013 day 3

I was lost
in some corners of world
where dark secrets lay
and everything is forbidden

I was lost
trying to find a path
what belonged to others? 
and what was mine? 

I was lost
which direction to go
back or move forth
undecided I moved

But look what I found! 
words to express
words to cherish
words to befriend

And so I let my fear go
driving into the blended poems
Travelling what lies beyond eyes
Into the mist of dreams abound

That was my first poem I remember
written with heart
-The Path

A special dedication to Saumya di for its because of her I started writing. 
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26 comments:

  1. PratibhaOctober 3, 2013 at 3:21 PM

    and look what you gave us ,,, such an amazing poet and a sweet lil friend :)

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  2. UnknownOctober 3, 2013 at 3:24 PM

    @Nimue
    yeahi! Cheers to saumya di! :*

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  3. Lady WhispersOctober 3, 2013 at 5:57 PM

    wow what a piece :)
    You are indeed one great find :)

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  4. Shah WhartonOctober 3, 2013 at 6:51 PM

    This is a fitting tribute. Lovely. X

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  5. TO TOUCH THE HORIZONOctober 3, 2013 at 7:00 PM

    I was waiting to read your poem as much as I was waiting read Pratibha's. I never read your poems before until the last three poems and am glad that OctPoWriMo 2013 introduced your poems to me. You write with such ease with such simple words. Happy writing..hope to see more of you.

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  6. seekingmemeOctober 3, 2013 at 8:38 PM

    You really got me with that first image! I love the idea of being lost where dark secrets lay and everything is forbidden. Beautiful!

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  7. AnonymousOctober 3, 2013 at 10:39 PM

    A poetry is beautifully written when it brings a smile on your face and a tear to your eye. Reading this has brought out the same in me. Somewhere in my heart I hated the way you were feeling before writing anything and then loved the reason which made you write your first poetry.

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  8. Saumya KulshreshthaOctober 4, 2013 at 12:09 AM

    You did? I had no idea! And the poem is beautiful :)

    PS- My blog misses your comments.

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  9. snlkcOctober 4, 2013 at 12:21 AM

    This was so sweet Aavi ... My blogger buddy .. I like your scheme of verses ... I like how you place them .. gives a perfect feel ! Thanks for sharing Aavi :*

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  10. The EnchantressOctober 4, 2013 at 1:03 AM

    Amaazing...loved reading cery bit of it anf the look of your blog is awe- inspiring...

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  11. AnonymousOctober 4, 2013 at 2:59 AM

    Great poem. (and much easier to read now!)

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  12. ChristineOctober 4, 2013 at 4:07 AM

    I love this heartfelt, touching poem!

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  13. UnknownOctober 4, 2013 at 2:02 PM

    @Lady whispers
    Great find! that sounds astonishing :O
    Thanks di! :*

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  14. UnknownOctober 4, 2013 at 2:03 PM

    @Shah Wharton
    Thanks for saying that, really.
    And also thanks for dropping by so often!

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  15. UnknownOctober 4, 2013 at 2:05 PM

    @TO TOUCH THE HORIZON
    Ohhhhhh!!! :O really! Am on seventh heaven. Yippee! I have another blogger friend. I am glad I started this OctPoWriMo 2013 (thanks to pratibha di). Am honored that you wait for my poems. :)
    But I still cant make a comment on your blog :(

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  16. UnknownOctober 4, 2013 at 2:06 PM

    @seekingmeme
    That actually happened, but I thank my stars I found the way to even brighter place.
    Thanks for commenting ^_^

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  17. UnknownOctober 4, 2013 at 2:08 PM

    @ankitsharma88
    Oh! so the poem hit you somewhere same as it did to me.
    Poetry is healing.
    All your comments are amazing and heart touching! :)

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  18. UnknownOctober 4, 2013 at 2:09 PM

    @Saumya di
    Thanks!
    Man! commenting on your blog.. its so difficult to find words. But am coming!

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  19. UnknownOctober 4, 2013 at 2:10 PM

    @snlkc
    Yippeee! we the blogger buddies! and you a beautiful soul!
    I love it when you like what I write, really. fills the empty spaces!
    Thanks :*

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  20. UnknownOctober 4, 2013 at 2:11 PM

    @ Enchantress
    Thank you! and am gad you liked the blog. :)
    Thanks for making a comment too!

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  21. UnknownOctober 4, 2013 at 2:11 PM

    @Rhi Williams
    haha! I took a lesson out of your previous comment :) So its better cos of you.
    Thanks! ^_^

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  22. UnknownOctober 4, 2013 at 2:13 PM

    @Christine
    The journey into poetic world is enchanting in itself!
    Thanks for making a comment! :)

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  23. jiturajgorOctober 14, 2013 at 11:54 PM

    This may be your first 'written' poem but It clearly shows your deep and meaningful thought-process. And I am sure there are many more waiting since long and eager to emerge. Please inked them to paper.

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    1. UnknownOctober 21, 2013 at 6:15 PM

      sir, welcome to my blog first of all. and thank you for this beautiful comment. yes, there are more.. I hope someday they manage to come here, on my blog.
      Thank you again!

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  24. Rahul SharmaOctober 21, 2013 at 4:31 AM

    But look what I found! damn!!

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    1. UnknownOctober 21, 2013 at 6:16 PM

      hahah! Am just soo happy seeing so many comments from you!

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