Down the hallwaythere's a woman crying
cursing and prayingat the same time
I wonder what occurred to her
as I take each step towards her
one by one
Only with one motive
I will be gentle
with her pain
with her sayings
I will understand all her sufferings.
Yes there is a boy
living next door
with a crooked smile
and a broken soul
He whispers often some words
but whimpers more and more
I shall knock his door
Ask him his pain
that dwells in him
I will be gentle
with his shouts
with his cryings
I will understand even if he yells.
The girl who lost someone close
last year
still has red eyes
and her soul has gone black
She stays mum while walking down the road
dropped her dreams of floating aloof
I shall walk with her someday
talk of whom she lost
and why she blames herself
I will be gentle
with her curses
with her wounds
I will understand even if she doesn't say a word.
For I have found myself
in others' happiness
trying to be gentle with their dreams
has become my gift
And so discovered a piece of me
which lives for others
yes, indeed
Being gentle with them
has made me be gentle with me.
This poem speaks a lot about you!! I love it.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful!!:)
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful. X1
ReplyDeleteAnd this is why i so much relate to your heart. So much love you .. beautiful post. Beautiful thoughts.
ReplyDeleteI am LOVING today's poems! Yours is outstanding as a statement that in gentleness to others we can learn gentleness with self. Thank you for this lesson!
ReplyDeletebeautiful
ReplyDeleteThis piece just tells what a beautiful soul you have and that is one reason I so love you :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it girl :)
Let me stop reading this post for the tenth time and make a comment. The one best part of the prompt is that it opens the door of our wisdom and imagination. Though forcefully to write a post or through the daily pains and beauty I am glad it opened yours. Else an amazing post like this would never ever have been born :)
ReplyDeleteWowww...
ReplyDeleteFelt like watching a movie...it was that intense...already in love with you...a beautiful angel you are..
Beautiful philosophy of life shared in your lovely poem. Thank you. xoA
ReplyDelete@Nave
ReplyDeleteyes, yes it does. :) Thank you soo much bhaiya!
@payal agarwal
ReplyDeleteam glad you liked it. :) really.
thanks for making a comment here.
@shah wharton
ReplyDeletethank you so much! and why couldnt I open your post link today? :O
@Nimue
ReplyDeleteAnd I relate so much to you! and its because of you that I am swimming deep in love nowerdays!
I am blessed I have you! :)
@seekingmeme
ReplyDeleteYes! day 4 challenge was amazing and everyone wrote such awesome thoughts!
I guess I have been doing that since forever and its kind of fun! :)
thank you so much for writing here ! :D
@TO TOUCH THE HORIZON
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! ^_^
@Lady Whispers
ReplyDeleteWe all have beautiful souls!! and I relate so much with you all the time. and I love you too!
thanks for comment :*
@ankitsharma88
ReplyDeleteyou read it for ten times ? :O thats a success for me! and yes, you are right, the prompt is making me evolve so much and meet new people and learn and grow. I am loving this October! all thanks to amazing people like you! :)
@Enchantress
ReplyDeleteawww! your sweet words move me.
thank you for saying this! :)
@Annis
ReplyDeleteI read your blog too. How beautifully you write!
Thank you for making a lovely comment here! :)