I am a lover
who dreams day and night
to sit by your side
I am a lover
who wishes to count the stars
stuck on the blue black sky
and on some star-less nights
I shall look in your eyes instead
I am a lover
who prays of a morning maybe
when you are the first thing I see
I am a lover
who grows from inside
but sometimes is all childlike
I am a lover
who count days when you are gone
The desperation kills me
But the calender makes me wait
until I see you next
for patience is the key to your fortress
I am a lover
who sees and observes
the falling leaves or the rains
the windy days or cold nights
In them, I see your reminisces
I am a lover
who talks of you all the time
not with others but with myself
For I dont mind
You left a part of you, in me, to reside
But more than a lover
I can be a friend
A companion when you need
Or a listener in longing
But more than a lover
I wish to be a person
who doesnt demand your love in return
But the one who
beholds your faith and trust
A very well thought out poem. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteA lover not a fighter. :) Well done. X
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful picture of mature romantic love, Aavika. Thank you. xoA
ReplyDeleteAavi, you ARE a perfect lover! What a poem. Good work, well done!
ReplyDeleteloved it.
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ReplyDeleteI am a lover
who talks of you all the time
not with others but with myself
For I dont mind
You left a part of you, in me, to reside
I could connect with these lines cause I am myself love sick to a great extent...loved it
It brings me pure happiness when I read this post. Beauty in each stanza. Love in each words. Stay Awesome :)
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDeleteSo sweet and gentle! Beautiful!
ReplyDelete"I am a lover
ReplyDeletewho talks of you all the time
not with others but with myself
For I dont mind
You left a part of you, in me, to reside"
Very beautiful.
how did i miss this ??
ReplyDeletelooved this .. specially the lines yogesh pointed out ..
@Misky
ReplyDeleteThank you soo much! and you made your first visit here! am glad!
thank you soo much!
@Shah Wharton
ReplyDeleteOh yes! its like make peace not war :P
And I am your fan! I read all yours!
thank youu!
@Annis Cassells
ReplyDeleteawww! thank you! thats so sweet of you to say! :)
@snlkc
ReplyDeletewow! perfect lover! thats the best thing I have heard since quite some time!
thank youu! <3
@TO TOUCH THE HORIZON
ReplyDeleteaah! you liked it! thank you!
and thanks for leaving a comment too!
@Enchantress
ReplyDeletewooho! cheers to love-sickness! its like the best disease in world to catch!
thanks for this comment! :)
@ankitsharma88
ReplyDeleteand you read all my poems, that brings me pure happiness!
thank you for commenting each time! means so much to me!
@Rhi Williams
ReplyDeletegeez! ^_^ thanks!
@seekingmeme
ReplyDeletethank you soo much! love is gentle ^_^
thanks for dropping by!
@Yogesh ji
ReplyDeleteThese lines mean the most to me, too!
I knew you would connect to this.
Thank you soooo muchhhhh for commenting!!!
:) :)
:) Thank you so much for sharing.
Delete@Nimue
ReplyDeleteno wonder you are the perfect couple in the world!
you like same things!
awww! thank youu for making a comment di! :*