Deep Thought

"A man would do nothing, if he waited until he could do it so well that no one would find fault with what he has done"
- Cardinal Newman

Sunday, June 16, 2013

Thousand times...

A thousand times I have seen you
Spell bounded; breathtaking
Begetting beautiful thoughts in my mind
I see paradise

A thousand times I have felt you
Indeed; you are a nature's fancy
Mystery you remain to most of us
Capture me under your tyranny

A thousand times you have held me
Your warmth is all I see
Penetrating deep down my skin
Usher me in the heavens of all kind

A thousand times you have come to me
Crossing miles and miles
I yearn for you more;
stay with me all night

A thousand times I have tried
To tell the world what you mean to me
But words fail to describe
That... "You complete me"

10 comments:

  1. Brilliant. Absolutely . A typically poignant piece of poetry it is Aavika:)

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  4. @Swateye
    I can see you've tried too hard and yet you were determinant to post a comment :D Thanks a lot for that! :) A huge smile crosses my face. Love you! <3

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    1. @Jagpreet
      Thank you thank you thankyou! :)

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  6. It strongly reminds me of my poem 'A Thousand Times Over'. In fact, your entire blog reminds me of my blog. Happy :)

    This was a beautiful poem.

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    1. @Saumya di

      I hope that is a compliment ? :S Poem is not really my forte, I know it somewhere, yet I try :P

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    1. @Madhuresh
      Did my blog appear in "next blog" option? Am so glad I've got an enthusiastic reader! Thanks a lot for the comment too!

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