Deep Thought

"A man would do nothing, if he waited until he could do it so well that no one would find fault with what he has done"
- Cardinal Newman

Saturday, October 5, 2013

I am a lover #OctPoWriMo 2013 day 5


I am a lover
who dreams day and night
to sit by your side

I am a lover
who wishes to count the stars
stuck on the blue black sky
and on some star-less nights
I shall look in your eyes instead

I am a lover
who prays of a morning maybe
when you are the first thing I see

I am a lover
who grows from inside 
but sometimes is all childlike

I am a lover
who count days when you are gone
The desperation kills me 
But the calender makes me wait
until I see you next
for patience is the key to your fortress

I am a lover
who sees and observes
the falling leaves or the rains
the windy days or cold nights
In them, I see your reminisces 

I am a lover
who talks of you all the time
not with others but with myself
For I dont mind
You left a part of you, in me, to reside

But more than a lover
I can be a friend
A companion when you need
Or a listener in longing

But more than a lover
I wish to be a person
who doesnt demand your love in return
But the one who
beholds your faith and trust

23 comments:

  1. A very well thought out poem. Nicely done.

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  2. A lover not a fighter. :) Well done. X

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  3. Absolutely beautiful picture of mature romantic love, Aavika. Thank you. xoA

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  4. Aavi, you ARE a perfect lover! What a poem. Good work, well done!

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  5. I am a lover
    who talks of you all the time
    not with others but with myself
    For I dont mind
    You left a part of you, in me, to reside

    I could connect with these lines cause I am myself love sick to a great extent...loved it

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  6. It brings me pure happiness when I read this post. Beauty in each stanza. Love in each words. Stay Awesome :)

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  7. "I am a lover
    who talks of you all the time
    not with others but with myself
    For I dont mind
    You left a part of you, in me, to reside"

    Very beautiful.

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  8. how did i miss this ??
    looved this .. specially the lines yogesh pointed out ..

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  9. @Misky
    Thank you soo much! and you made your first visit here! am glad!
    thank you soo much!

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  10. @Shah Wharton
    Oh yes! its like make peace not war :P
    And I am your fan! I read all yours!
    thank youu!

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  11. @Annis Cassells
    awww! thank you! thats so sweet of you to say! :)

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  12. @snlkc
    wow! perfect lover! thats the best thing I have heard since quite some time!
    thank youu! <3

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  13. @TO TOUCH THE HORIZON
    aah! you liked it! thank you!
    and thanks for leaving a comment too!

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  14. @Enchantress
    wooho! cheers to love-sickness! its like the best disease in world to catch!
    thanks for this comment! :)

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  15. @ankitsharma88
    and you read all my poems, that brings me pure happiness!
    thank you for commenting each time! means so much to me!

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  16. @seekingmeme
    thank you soo much! love is gentle ^_^
    thanks for dropping by!

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  17. @Yogesh ji
    These lines mean the most to me, too!
    I knew you would connect to this.
    Thank you soooo muchhhhh for commenting!!!
    :) :)

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  18. @Nimue
    no wonder you are the perfect couple in the world!
    you like same things!
    awww! thank youu for making a comment di! :*

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