Deep Thought

"A man would do nothing, if he waited until he could do it so well that no one would find fault with what he has done"
- Cardinal Newman

Wednesday, July 10, 2013

First Rain

A winter, an autumn have passed
Since I haven't seen you
Your hands that embraced
Your love that swept me
Are all counted in the bygone days

The heavy rain proves it
The leaves that fall, the shelter it breaks
Maybe you broke mine

But crippled flowers bloom again
Even after the heavy rain
Yes, its time to bid goodbye
To your memories I don't want to recognize

Look! the rain has come
Washing me ashore to a new land
Which doesn't have a magic you once had

After witnessing thousand showers with you; for you
This one is mine and only mine
My First Rain is here
It wants me to grow once more
Absolute, Determined


  1. The first rain of realizing the self... beautiful one!

    1. @Madhuresh

      Its dedicated to self, too. Am glad you liked! Thanks for the comment! :)

  2. The leaves that fall, the shelter it breaks

    Brilliance :)
    Fresh take
    Well observed

    keep it going;)

  3. @Amit Charles
    'First Rain' is really special to me. Am thankful you liked & appreciated it. :)
    Thanks for the comment, here too.