The sudden moment which will come
when I shall see you before me
behold you, embrace you
My feet goes cold
The anxiety that comes with you
each time just doubles
I see stars in daytime
My heart makes a sound
The moment of impatience
to touch you or to feel
I halt, yes indeed
There's a crater in my soul
fear resides in it
The stomach churns when you talk
Lips shut tight
Are these butterflies? I dont know
But I know, I am a little nervous when you are around
If I might hurt you
That shall be a sin, in my words
I love the depth of feeling here. So deep, and yet very hopeful despite the butterflies. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteOh god ! This is what you write when you are so sleepy .. tu awesomeness hai yaar ..
ReplyDeleteI wrote much similar thoughts..lovely indeed..one can actually feel the anticipation.
ReplyDeleteWell captured emotions. Awesome poem Avika.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing !
Kya likhti ho
ReplyDeleteAnd when you tired and sleepy
Tum bus kuch jyada hi umada hoo :D
@christine
ReplyDeleteits bliss when someone reading my poem, connects with it.
thank you soo much! and also welcome to my blog world!
I hope you drop by often :)
@Nimue
ReplyDeleteagain, I wrote it getting inspired from you.
warna main nahi likh paati. Thank you di :*
@TO TOUCH THE HORIZON
ReplyDeleteI read yours too... got inspired and then wrote this. I think now my blog awaits for your comments. really.
thank you!
@Yogesh ji
ReplyDeletethank youuu! and your comments are making it look soo beautiful!
thank youu bhaiya! ^_^
@Lady Whispers
ReplyDeletehahaha.... aapko poem pasand aati hai kyunki aapko main pasand hu :) haina?
<3 umdaa toh aap likhte ho! :) bas inspire kar jaate ho..