Your brown eyes
Is what I think of
and wide smile
Is what I think of
from dusk till dawn
Light that you are to me
Thats the only think I see
Let me seek you in
let you penetrate within
One sunset more
next sunsrise you will be here
let me dream of you
yes, I will see you soon
Excellent poem :) love the "let me dream of you" line!
ReplyDeletethats, infact my favorite line too! thank you :)
DeleteLoved the pattern. And the words. You are gem. And you know it..
ReplyDeleteoh geez! you appreciate my writing so much! thank you!
Deletenoo, am not a gem :P
Really good, Aavi :)
ReplyDeletethank you di :* Love!
Deletehey i m spchless
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! :) :D means a lot to me.
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