Once again I am submitting a post comprising of two poems for day 20 and day 21 for OctPoWriMo. Spare me, yet again!
DAY 20- Soil to Plant
so yesterday was great
cos it rained
i hope you got
the purest water I'd sent
and later it was sunny
when you were busy cooking
yes I know the food was good
You'd sent some down here
This is just a thank you letter
for I am what I am
because of your efforts
i hope you remain blessed
cos you are god's own angel
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DAY 20- Soil to Plant
so yesterday was great
cos it rained
i hope you gotthe purest water I'd sent
and later it was sunny
when you were busy cooking
yes I know the food was good
You'd sent some down here
This is just a thank you letter
for I am what I am
because of your efforts
i hope you remain blessed
cos you are god's own angel
DAY 21- The Sky
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so infinite
sometimes blue
sometimes white
sometimes yellow
sometimes black
all colors it has
still for rainbow it awaits
why can't it be happy
with what it has?
Day 20 - was beautiful and picture made it so much more green and leafy ;) I love how you write about plants and trees and the nature .. <3
ReplyDeleteDay 21 - lovely lines - again very natural, with different hues, not just of colours, but of life and feelings and thoughts ! :)
You just know my thoughts so well and the best part is, you summarize it in best way possible, just what I am unable to do. You understand me quite well. :) Thank you so much di!
DeleteLovely thoughts. Beautiful words!
ReplyDeleteoh! thank you soo much! :)
Deletelovely thoughts !!
ReplyDelete^_^ thank you! :)
Deleteboth the poem are beautiful. lovely thoughts.
ReplyDeletethank you soo much! for leaving this comment and dropping by.. :) thank you
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