Another hour of silence
with your hands in mine
eyes seeing you
mind thinking nothing
Just, this silence is so comforting
with you
Sitting in your balcony
observing trees and nothing
Beautiful nature
And beautiful you
Just, the silence is so comforting
with you
Long walks on the road
hand in hand
I talk about everything
and you listen to it all, not really saying much
Just, your silence is so comforting
to me
The aurora lights I dream of
I see them in your eyes already
You are a gift, I say
Like heaven or even more
Just, your silence is so comforting
A part of life, now it looks
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Beautiful..I could feel I was there..quite romantic :)
ReplyDeleteOh! this means a lot to me! That you thought so! :) thank you !
Deleteromantic! geez! thats a compliment :) hugeee one! thank you for dropping by!
beautiful flow .. Love the feelings the words convey .. silently .. :)
ReplyDeleteahh! thank you! Words often cant say much as silence can..sometimes.. :*
DeleteThis was so beautifully written and it just flows. Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteFlows in silence :D thank you!! :)
DeleteA very beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteThe critical part of my commentary has nothing to do with your abilities. The background is interesting, but it's a bit difficult to read the text against it.
oh! thanks for commenting. and this background, i should do something about it, Yes! am glad you pointed this out, really.
DeleteAnd am open to all sorts of criticism and comments regarding my blog/writing. It helps in growing! :) Thank you!
Awww so beautiful, the calming and comforting feel of this comes through effectively. Just lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you!! ^_^ Am glad those feelings just got conveyed aptly.!
DeleteComfortable silence the most wonderful thing.
ReplyDeleteIt depends on the person though. and if you love someone, you love their words as much as you love their silence :) isnt?
DeleteThanks for commenting!
A beautiful harmonic poem, great structure creating a wonderful sense of calm.
ReplyDeleteThank you! this is my genre! really! :) so I enjoy writing here more.
DeleteThank you for dropping by! :)
The following lines remind me of a photograph you once sent me of your balcony :) -
ReplyDelete"Sitting in your balcony
observing trees and nothing
Beautiful nature
And beautiful you
Just, the silence is so comforting
with you"
ohhh!! that photograph! yes yes!
DeleteThese lines are specially dedicated to silent nature! :) You are awesome! you catch everything so rightly! :* <3