I missed yesterday, everyday writing a poem isnt a cake walk for me. But! Today am banging OctPoWriMo with two poems, one for yesterday, one for today. And got this idea from Nimue (our favorite blogger)- miss it yet dont miss it.
Hide- Day 17
Swinging on the swing
the wind would hit thy face
Cycling day and night
the wind would hit thy face
face of a kid, I remember
Making castles of the sand
falling and renewing again
never give up, this no one taught
just a shallow voice from inside
voice of child's pure soul, I remember
Playing hide and seek
or something with a ball
making our own games
and mastering them all
innocence of a child, I remember
Cooking some invisible food
making house under the table
sweating, shivering or just nothing
games of childhood
only a child remembers
Hide- Day 17
Swinging on the swing
the wind would hit thy face
Cycling day and night
the wind would hit thy faceface of a kid, I remember
Making castles of the sand
falling and renewing again
never give up, this no one taught
just a shallow voice from inside
voice of child's pure soul, I remember
Playing hide and seek
or something with a ball
making our own games
and mastering them all
innocence of a child, I remember
Cooking some invisible food
making house under the table
sweating, shivering or just nothing
games of childhood
only a child remembers
Lame- Day 18
Electric wind of the fan
something silly on my mind
its nothing but a day
a boring day, above of all
Some weird faces I make
when am at house and with me
brother would look from behind and wonder
what the hell keeps happening to her
I just want to sleep some more
no specific time for it
lets get over with this poem
and head to bed
Your poem about games put me back into childhood.
ReplyDeleteI could imagine it all. Loved it :)
And your lame poem was super cute :D
You are such a find to poetry :D
Thats great! So even you had the same awesome, simple yet beautiful childhood!
DeleteAnd thank you for even liking the lame poem, lol!
the child in you will always remember the games and the lessons darling :*
ReplyDeleteAnd about writing 2 poems today ?? i say its 31 poems in 31 days .. you can write all of them same day too :P
:D
Lame poem was good ..
thank youu! I hope I remember them all too!
DeleteAnd yeah, you push me so much! You rock!
brother would look from behind and wonder
ReplyDeletewhat the hell keeps happening to her - I burst out laughing reading this one...you are just so fabolous...i wana give you a tight hug AAVIKAAAAA
hahahahah! reallly? thats great you feel for the lame poem!
DeleteAnd, this actually happens :P
lets share the hug someday!
Both poems were good .. especially poem 2 :
ReplyDelete"Some weird faces I make
when am at house and with me
brother would look from behind and wonder
what the hell keeps happening to her"
Hahahah - such cute lines !
this is the best part! you all are falling for a real lame lame poem people! :P
Deletesonalika di! you are just so cute!
Wonderfully written. Beautifully Woven and amazingly narrated.
ReplyDeleteOn the post "Lame" well you are sweetness personified. Love reading what you have to offer for the readers every single time.
You liked the lame one too??? Oh man! :P
Deletethank you soo soo much! For just visiting, reading and the best part- for leaving your words here! thank you ^_^