Deep Thought

"A man would do nothing, if he waited until he could do it so well that no one would find fault with what he has done"
- Cardinal Newman

Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Beauty #OctPoWriMo 2013 day 9

The eyes would tell a different story
of her shyness and of her glory
The smile would get a little curve there
where sun would set and disappear
The heart so red and sometimes black
would make you happy or make you sad
Hand gestures that move back and forth
not giving you idea of what she meant
Silly is her mind and her thoughts
she barely says, she barely shares
Her hair is like windy strong
make you go round and round
Her nature is like flowing water
you'll flow with it and reach no end
Thats the beauty of a woman
describing her is so unfair

I should have written this before the lyrical poem starts but anyways- I had so much fun writing it! and singing it in some kindergarten-poem form.
Thanks to OctPoWriMo! 


  1. This has a beautiful flow. Its like that water flow which starts from a small waterfall and ends up in a huge ocean. This poetry starts off from your heart and ends up to this world touching hearts everywhere. This is the beauty.

  2. love this..
    I sang this too ..
    oh , i so much love wen i can pick up a rythm for the poem :)

    It so looks like you had so much fun !!!

  3. last lines were beautiful !

    and you're alwys straight from heart so it has to be magical :)

  4. Wow this was so beautiful and lyrical.
    Loved it totally :)

  5. @ankitsharma88
    oh man! its so unexpected someone would like my nursery rhyme kind of poem! but you did! and yours is the first comment, its bliss to me!
    thank you for this beautiful comment you left! :)

  6. @Nimue
    I loved writing it! and I loved reciting it too! again and again.
    haha! Wasnt this an amazing prompt they gave?
    Oh! am learning so much! :)
    thanks for the comment!

  7. @Enchantress
    oh my! those are such beautiful words you gave to me!
    :') thank you soo muchh!

  8. @Lady Whispers
    yippeee! Wasnt it fun? i hope you laughed too! Cos I laughed so much!
    thank you di :*