Deep Thought

"A man would do nothing, if he waited until he could do it so well that no one would find fault with what he has done"
- Cardinal Newman

Monday, October 28, 2013

My Sister & Skin & I am #OctPoWriMo day 26, 27, 28

Posting three poem today compensating the previous days. Of day 26, day 27, day 28 here. Spare me, yet again.

DAY 26: My Sister

For all that she's been
Sister three years elder to me
Fighting the storm
sailing over sees
Selfless she's been 
Does not believe in God
All seasons she blooms
A social worker, a feminist
Bitter she may be
for thats how the truth is
the soldier
the messenger
the north star
For all that she's been 

DAY 27: Skin

Your skin
Soft its been
Sometimes so thin
What all you hide within
War, if, is your skin
I'd let you win
Beyond zinn

Day 28: I am.... an introspector

Life goes as it goes
directionless, at times
But a cousin sister taught me
how to focus on energies within

I ask questions
Where are we in life, right now? 
not to you
To myself, often
Of what I am doing
Of what I wish to do
What is happiness, as I call it
What is bliss, do I know of it?

Then I met another person
who does the same like me
well, at a better level instead
He asks questions
and finds answers too
He seeks
He discovers

I hope someday I can
Direct all energies 
and transcend to the universe
in a better way
For I introspect
In search of that light


  1. "I hope someday I can

    Direct all energies

    and transcend to the universe

    in a better way"

    I think this is the finest of aspirations!

    1. and these are my favorite part of the poem too. am happy you liked it. thank you for passing by and commenting :)

  2. Inspirational poems! Lovely. :)

    1. thank you Shah :)
      P.S- I love your blog!

  3. Perfecto! All three of your posts.

    1. thank you, I wish you keep liking what i write :P

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    1. Thanks Rhian. Am happy you dropped by :)

  5. Loved all three. You are so good with words girls. I am all smiles every time I read you :)

    1. your comments make me soo happy! thank you so much di :)