Deep Thought

"A man would do nothing, if he waited until he could do it so well that no one would find fault with what he has done"
- Cardinal Newman

Monday, October 21, 2013

Soil to Plant & Sky #OctPoWriMo 2013 day 20 and day 21

Once again I am submitting a post comprising of two poems for day 20 and day 21 for OctPoWriMo. Spare me, yet again!

DAY 20- Soil to Plant

so yesterday was great
cos it rained
i hope you got
the purest water I'd sent

and later it was sunny
when you were busy cooking
yes I know the food was good
You'd sent some down here

This is just a thank you letter
for I am what I am
because of your efforts
i hope you remain blessed

cos you are god's own angel

DAY 21- The Sky

 so infinite
sometimes blue
sometimes white
sometimes yellow 
sometimes black
all colors it has
still for rainbow it awaits
why can't it be happy

with what it has?


  1. Day 20 - was beautiful and picture made it so much more green and leafy ;) I love how you write about plants and trees and the nature .. <3

    Day 21 - lovely lines - again very natural, with different hues, not just of colours, but of life and feelings and thoughts ! :)

    1. You just know my thoughts so well and the best part is, you summarize it in best way possible, just what I am unable to do. You understand me quite well. :) Thank you so much di!

  2. both the poem are beautiful. lovely thoughts.

    1. thank you soo much! for leaving this comment and dropping by.. :) thank you